[RhetoricThug]

Axed ecology
Taxed economy
Toxicology
Inequality
Don't bother, brother

I've traveled down river on the Ganges
I've traveled down river on the Ganges

Free sail
Free sail
Eye see

Criminal banality
Monopoly monotony
Excessive fees
Unapologetic legality
Please wait in the lobby

I've traveled down river on the Ganges
I've traveled down river on the Ganges

Slow sail
Slow sail
Stand still
I plea

Body banked
Upon shore
Sweet river water cure
Return I fear
Mortal allure

I've traveled down river on the Ganges
Eye
Mind
Body

The only way we may escape our beastly ugliness is through Nature's grace- RT

[claver]

rap ?

[RhetoricThug]

No.

Do you observe any audible instrumental tempo looped behind spoken verse? I sure don't, so I'm sure this can not be considered rap.

I am addressing the temptation of ego. How we are continuously caught up with human affairs, and how communing with nature reminds us how to escape temptation brought on by our individual ego. I use contrast to provide the relief.

Result of Ego drivenness
"Axed ecology
Taxed economy
Toxicology
Inequality
Don't bother, brother"

Don't bother with such thoughts, for you are flowing down river. Alive you are after birth and before death, moving down river. You are free to sail, but you will always see human impulse, desire, and ego surrounding the river bank. The river is energy the river is life, on its shore you will find things which feed off life's enigmatic energy.

More Ego Drivenness
"Criminal banality
Monopoly monotony
Excessive fees
Unapologetic legality
Please wait in the lobby"

Of course, once you compare and contrast man's natural spirit with an inauthentic ego, you fear your return to land.

"Body banked
Upon shore
Sweet river water cure
Return I fear
Mortal allure"

So I end my piece with this- "The only way we may escape our beastly ugliness is through Nature's grace"
For I implore everyone to travel downstream without worry, free from human temptation, so they can reflect on self and what it is to be. Returning to land nourished with renewed spirit.


I wish you questioned the content of my piece, instead of its structure.
Explaining this defeats my poetic expression. Your one word question is hopelessly empty.